Mrs. Doane's Class
Bloomfield Elementary
Bloomfield, New York

 

Standards and Assessment
Apple Cinquain Poems

Cinquain poems are a great way to reinforce nouns, verbs, adjectives and synonyms. We began this project by reading several stories, poems and Internet articles about apples. We also went on a field trip to a local apple farm. In class, we brainstormed lists of nouns, verbs and adjectives that related to our apple theme. Students then referred to these lists when creating their cinquain poems.

Rough drafts were completed, following this format:

Line 1: a title (NOUN)

Line 2: two words that describe the title (adjectives)

Line 3: three words that tell something the title does (VERBS)

Line 4: a four-word phrase about the title

Line 5: a word that means the same as the title (SYNONYM)

Then students used Kid Pix Deluxe to format and illustrate final drafts.

This project supports the following New York State Learning Standards:

English Language Arts

Standard 1: Language for Information and Understanding

As speakers and writers, they will use oral and written language that follows the accepted conventions of the English language to acquire, interpret, apply and transmit information.

Performance indicators:

  • Gather and interpret information from children’s reference books, magazines, Internet
  • Select information appropriate to the purpose of their investigation and relate ideas from one text to another with teacher guidance

Standard 2: Language for Literary Response and Expression

As speakers and writers, they will use oral and written language that follows the accepted conventions of the English language for self-expression and artistic creation.

Performance indicators:

  • Listen and read a variety of literature of different genres intended for young readers
  • Recognize some features that distinguish the genres and use those features to aid comprehension with teacher guidance
  • Create their own written works that reflect the elements of the literature they have read, using appropriate vocabulary
  • Observe the conventions of grammar and usage, spelling and punctuation with teacher guidance

Standard 3: Language for Critical Analysis and Evaluation

As listeners and readers, students will analyze experiences, ideas, information and issues presented by others using a variety of established criteria.

Performance indicators:

  • Listen to or read to form opinions about a variety of literary or informational texts

Standard 4: Language for Social Interaction

Students will listen, speak, read and write for social interaction.

Students will use oral and written language for effective social communication with a wide variety of people.

Performance indicators:

  • Listen attentively and recognize when it is appropriate for them to speak
  • Take turns speaking and responding to others’ ideas in conversation
  • Recognize and use informal written communication for social interaction with teacher direction

The following rubric may be used to evaluate student performance:

Apple Cinquain Rubric

Criteria

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Use of gathered information and word bank. Needed considerable teacher guidance for word selection Needed some teacher guidance for word selection Used resources and word lists independently
Reflects elements of a cinquain poem Three or fewer lines in proper format Four lines in proper format Each of five lines in proper format
Uses conventions of grammar and usage, spelling and punctuation 3 or more errors in spelling, punctuation, capitalization 1-2 errors in spelling, punctuation, capitalization No errors
Final draft in Kid Pix Deluxe Final draft is formatted and illustrated with much teacher assistance. Final draft is correctly formatted and illustrated with some teacher assistance Final draft is correctly formatted and creatively illustrated independently.

Other apple related lessons and activities we used included:

  • K-W-L charts
  • Apple tasting, then completed apple charts for appearance, flavor, uses
  • Created posters of the seasons of an apple tree after reading The Seasons of Arnold’s Apple Tree by Gail Gibbons
  • Apple graphs showing leading apple producing states
  • The Apples of Your Eye glyph project
  • Johnny Appleseed Day apple grams to school staff
  • Baked apple cookies for Open House night
  • Class field trip to a local apple farm
  • Apple Bytes online activities

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