Mrs. Gardner
Norwood Elementary School
Port Jefferson Station, New York

 

After discussing the 5 senses covered in our new health program "The Great Body Shop", each student wrote a poem about apples. Each student then typed all or some of the poem on the "Amazing Writing Machine," in addition to illustrating the poem. We ate different types of apples for inspiration.
Apple Pie

Hear a cooking apple pie.

See a hot apple pie.

Smell a good apple pie.

Taste a great apple pie.

Feel a hot apple pie in your mouth.

by Garrett

Apple Trees

Touch the bumpy bark.

See the perfect apples.

Hear them fall.

Smell the sweet apples.

Taste the very good apples.

by Frankie

Apple Sauce

Hear the crunch when I cut the apples.

Smell the cinnamon.

Taste great apple sauce.

Feel smushy apple sauce.

See it all gone.

by Meagan

Apples

See a red apple.

Feel a bumpy, bitten apple.

Smell a stinky apple.

Taste a disgusting apple.

Hear an apple crunch.

by David W.

Apple Pie

See a dandy apple pie.

Smell a great apple pie.

Taste a delicious apple pie.

Hear me eat the apple pie.

Feel good because apple pie is excellent.

by Allison

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Apple Pie

See the steam from the pie.

Feel a hot apple pie.

Smell a good apple pie.

Taste a yummy apple pie.

Hear the apple pie crunch in my mouth.

by Justin

Apples

See a nice yellow apple.

Feel a smooth apple.

Smell a good apple.

Taste a sweet apple.

Hear a crunch when I bite it.

by Jeff

Apple

See an apple on the tree.

Hear the apple fall down.

Feel a rotten apple.

Smell a good apple.

Taste a delicious apple.

by Garry

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Red Apples

See a red apple tree.

Feel a sticky apple.

Smell a sweet apple.

Hear a crunchy apple.

Taste a sugary apple.

by Stephanie

Apple Tree

Smell the apple blossom.

See an apple in a tree.

Feel the apple on the tree.

Hear an apple fall from the tree.

Taste a green apple that fell from the tree.

by Michelle

 

 

Apples

See a green apple.

Feel a hard apple tree.

Smell a good apple pie.

Taste fresh apple juice.

Hear a fresh apple crunch.

by Frederick

 

 

Apple Pie

See a yummy apple pie.

Feel a hot apple pie.

Smell a yummy apple pie.

Taste a tasty apple pie.

Hear the crunch of apple pie.

by Kerry

Apples

See a red apple in a tree.

Hear it fall from the tree.

Feel a fresh apple.

Smell a great apple.

Taste a delicious apple.

by Cody

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Apples

See an apple up in a tree.

Hear an apple fall.

Touch a cold apple.

Taste a sweet apple.

Smell a good apple.

Tommy

Apples

Feel a gooey apple-yuk!

Taste a mossy apple-ugh!

Smell a delicious apple-super!

See an apple pie- very yummy!

Hear a yummy apple pie in my mouth!

David

Apple pie

See a round apple pie.

Feel a sticky apple pie.

Smell a good apple pie.

Taste a yummy apple pie.

Hear crumbs in my mouth.

Katie

Apples

See a green apple.

Feel a hard apple tree.

Smell a good apple pie.

Taste fresh apple juice.

Hear a fresh apple crunch.

Frederick

Apples

See a fat apple.

Hear a crunchy apple.

Touch a squishy apple.

Taste a yummy apple.

Nick G.

Apple Pie

See a round apple pie.

Feel a mushy apple in the apple pie.

Smell cinnamon.

Taste a great made apple pie.

Hear a crunchy apple pie.

Shannon

Apples

See red apples, green apples, even yellow.

Feel a squishy apple.

Smell fresh apples.

Hear a crunchy apple.

Taste-delicious in every way.

Chris

The Apple

See apples on an apple tree.

Taste them, they are good to eat.

Smell yummy, healthy apples.

Hear crunching apples.

Feel wet juice on the apple.

People everywhere love apples.

Nicky

 

Apples

One day an apple

Falls down from a tree.

I touch the red one.

It is smooth.

I hear it crunch,

When I eat an apple.

I tasted Red Delicious apples.

Yummy!!!

I smell the most tastiest apple.

I see beautiful apples.

I bring the apples home.

My mom makes an apple pie.

by Brianna

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Apple Pie

Hear an apple drop form a tree.

Smell a yummy apple pie.

See a cold apple pie.

Taste a delicious apple pie.

Feel it wet in your mouth.

by Lindsay

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The students showed the ability:
to follow a format for writing a "5 Senses" poem 
to use describing words
to write with the understanding of the subject in a logical order. 
New York State Standards:
ELA #1,2 and 4
MST #2 and 4
The Arts # 1

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