| Ms.
Tyler's Class Chester Ronning Elementary School Alberta, Canada |
Apple Acrostic Poetry |
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| Always good to eat Particular dessert Perfectly yummy Loves apples Eats lots of them Sometimes green by Megan and Cyanna |
All apples are red or green Perfect for eating Pretty yummy Leaves are green Eat at lunch Super yummy by Nicole and Amy |
| Apples are yummy Perfect for apple sauce Pretty red, green, and yellow Leave me some cinnamon apples Every day eat an apple Sweet and so yummy by Jeffrey and Samantha |
Apples are juicy and big. Pies are the best with brown sugar. Pretty yummy. Love them when bright red and sweet. Eat apple with bananas are the best. Sha-Leah loves apple pie. by Micheyl and Sha-Leah |
| Apples are sweet Pie is great with apple Pie is great! Like cheese cake Eat 'em up!! Still like cheesecake and pie by Brad and Kristen |
Apples are red Pie made out of apples Pretty green and ripe Lots of them Eat them as a snack Snappy apples by Kori and Stephanie |
| Apples are good! Perfect for snacks Pretty and very crunchy Leave some for me Excellent for snacks Shiny and tasty by Sarah-Faith and Joelle |
Apple pie. Pineapples. Perfect to eat. Likes apples. Eats apples. Sweet. by Michelle and Philip |
| Apples are red! Pretty good! Pie plus apples = apple pie! Little and yummy! Easy to make apple pie! Small are all! by Breanne and Azhia |
Always red Pretty red Pineapples Loves apples Eat apples Sour apples by Hope and Jose |
| Apples are red Prefers apples instead of bananas Play fetch with apples(with dog) Like apples Eats apples Slam dunks apples by Ben and Derek |
Apples are red and yellow and green. Pears and apples are really yummy. Pie is good if it's made from apples. Leave your teacher an apple. Eat them whenever you want to. Sweet and sour when they come. by Jay and Nathan |
| All apples are sour. Perfectly good! Perfectly delicious. Lucky friend Eventually turns red Super!!!! by Jessika and Chelsie |
Apples are sweet Please give me an apple Perfect pies Let me have some apple pie Even if you are hungry Sour and sweet by Blake and Aaron |
| Apples are good Pretty and green Pretty yummy Leave me some apples Every apple isn't green Scrumptious by Cody V. and Sean |
Amazing apples Plump and juicy Pretty sweet Leave me some pie Everybody loves apples Sweet by Colton and Robert |
| Apples are red Pie is made of apples Pretty, red, ripe apples Lots of them on a tree Eat them in a pie Snappy apples by Lacy and Ashley |
Apple pie Perfect to eat Pretty red Like to eat them Eatable Sweet or sour by Tammi and Allison |
| Apple turnover Perfect to eat Pretty good treat Lovely to eat Eat apples Sweet and tasty by Tyson and Brent |
Apples are red Perfect for pancakes Put them in a pie Leave some apples for the pancakes Eat after school Sour by Jordan and Michael |
| Apples are cool Picking them is fun Perfect tasting pie Lovely for eating Every apple tastes good Special to eat like candy apples. by Krista and Micheyl |
Apples are the best Paint red as red paint Pretty good for eating Lovely red Eating apples is fun Some pie would be nice by Erik and Deryk |
| Apples are red Pies are good especially apple pie Please can I have an apple? Large apples are good Elephants eat apples Sharing apples is good by Jamie and Kylan |
Apples are red Pies are good especially apple pie Please can I have an apple? Large apples are good Elephants eat apples Sharing apples is good by Jamie and Kylan |
Assessment My evaluation was based on a rubric out of 5.5 pts. Followed the model and produced an original, quality acrostic poem - a superior product 4pts. Followed the model and produced a good poem 3 pts. Followed the model but may have used some vocabulary or lines from the model 2pts. Experienced difficulty producing an acrostic poem and following the model 1 pt. Incomplete work but put forth an effort |
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