A
Retelling of The Missing Snowman by Jo Albee
Written
By: Mrs. Bowles's First Grade Enrichment Class
Maddy, Ben,
Brai, Ryann,
& Madeline
Our class
read the story, The Missing Snowman, as a shared
reading. We decided as a group to retell and re-write the
ending of the story. In the original story, Johnny's mother
buys him a snow globe to remind him of his times together with
his snowman friend. Below you will find our shared-writing
experience...
Once upon a
time, it was really snowing outside. A little boy, Johnny, made
a snowman because he wanted a friend. He dressed the snowman up
like pirate. Then his friends came over and they dressed the
snowman like a clown. Finally, they dressed him up in a scarf,
tall hat, buttons, a carrot nose, and eyes made of coal. This
made him into a regular snowman.
Then the
snowman started to melt. His mom got really upset because his
friend was disappearing. There was only a little bit of snow
from the snowman left. He rolled up
three small snowballs of different sizes and put them in the
freezer. Now he could play with his snowman all year long. His
friends made clothes for the snowman and the girls even brought
Barbie clothes to dress the snowman. He lived happily ever
after until next winter when he made a new snowman.
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