I used the Mouse Tales project as
the springboard for an international co-writing project that
paired my grade 2 class from Smiths Falls, Ontario, Canada with
Debbie Tanner�s grade 2 class from Lake Worth, Florida, USA
Debbie and I each introduced the
book If You Give a Mouse a Cookie, by Laura Numeroff, to
our classes. I used the book as a Read Aloud. I also read two
other Numeroff books, If You Give a Moose a Muffin and
If You Give a Pig a Pancake. During the reading of the books
my students worked in pairs as detectives to find out why the
main character asked for or needed things. We created Venn
Diagrams to compare and contrast the three stories. Through
these learning experiences we discovered the writing style of
circle stories.
Once each class was familiar with
the idea of a circle story we divided the students into teams of
six, with three students from each class on a team. To
familiarize themselves with their writing partners the writing
teams exchanged digital pictures. Some stories were started in
Canada and some were started in the United States and then the
students emailed back and forth adding to the stories. The
students were very exciting to read the emails to see what their
counterparts had added to the story. I was very impressed by the
cooperation among the team members while brainstorming the ideas
and sharing the job of typing. When the stories were completed
they hand illustrated their work and exchanged PowerPoint slide
shows of
their final product. Co-writing stories with peers from another
country kept the interest level very high throughout the
project.
The students
wrote seven stories altogether. Slide shows of these stories can
be found at
http://www.ucdsb.on.ca/djschoular/Ireland/projects.htm
If You Give a Hippo a Hamburger
By Romario, Chase, and Katherine,
Nairn, Victoria, and Jessica
If you give a hippo a hamburger
he�ll want some ketchup to go with it. The ketchup might remind
of his grandma�s chili. So he�ll want to go see her and have
some. On the way there he might notice the pictures on your
refrigerator so instead of going he�ll want to send her a
postcard. Then when you go outside to mail them he will see a
huge tree. He climbed the tree and saw a little cat. That
reminded him of a puppy in the pet store. He wanted to go buy
him but when then got there the puppy was already sold. While at
the mall he saw a fishing rod in the hardware store and that
reminded him of fishing with his grandpa. On the way to his
grandpa�s dock he saw a tomato tree, which reminded him of your
ketchup so he�ll ask you for some. Chances are when you give him
the ketchup he�ll want a hamburger to go with it.
If You Give a
Monarch Butterfly Some Nectar
By Daisy, David, and Savannah,
Stephanie, Allison and Max
If you give a Monarch butterfly
some nectar she will ask for some honey to go with it. When she
is done drinking it she will probably want some brownies. When
she is done eating the brownies it will remind her of the colour
brown. The colour brown will remind her of drawing pictures of
her friends. She will want to add some flowers. It will remind
her of her mother in a daisy field. So she'll want to send her a
postcard. She wrote the postcard and on the way to mail it she
saw her best friend Lady Bug flying home. Lady Bug invited her
to have a cookie and some milk. When the butterfly was done
eating the cookie she wanted to go to her grandma's house to get
her car to go to the mall. When she got to the Gap she bought 2
dresses and 4 pairs of pants for her husband. When she gave her
husband the pants she got ready for a party at Lady Bug's house.
When they got there, they heard music and saw lots of treats.
Next to the chips Monarch butterfly saw a jar of honey. Next to
the jar was a bouquet of daisies in a vase. She took the bouquet
and sipped the nectar from the flowers. Then the butterfly
played cards with the ladybug. After that the ladybug took all
her friends to the meadow where the flowers grow and the honey
is. If the honey is there...she'll want some nectar to go with
it.
If You Give a
Rabbit Some Lettuce
By Robin, Kathryn and Reese,
Oscar, Bobby, and Connor F.
If you give a rabbit some lettuce
she will want salad dressing to go with it. When she is done
eating she will probably think the tomatoes are a big red ball
so she will want to play ball. When she sees the flowers in the
field she will want to pick flowers and send them to her mother.
So she will pick up all the flowers she could see. Then she put
all the flowers in an envelope. After she�s done she will want
to send something to her like some cologne to him. Then she will
be tired. So you will have to put her in a cradle. When she
wakes up from her nap she will be hungry so she will ask for
some carrots. She likes to eat tomatoes and croutons with them.
And of course she will want some salad dressing but it is not a
very good salad without some lettuce.
If You Give an
Elephant an Apple
By Jarett, Alex, and Natalia
Stephanie P, Desarey, and Devin.
If you give an elephant an apple
he will want some chocolate milk to go with it. When he is done
the chocolate milk it will probably remind him of a circus. At
the circus he sees some clowns. Theyneed a volunteer and the
elephant got picked to juggle. When he was done he saw someone
eating and that reminded him of salsa, chips and French fries.
But then the salsa burned his tongue so then he would want to
play outside. After he was playing outside he was really thirsty
so he would want some chocolate milk. And of course he would
want an apple to go with it.
If You Give a
Horse a Cookie
By Stephanie M., Jayde and Eric,
Kashina, Gabby and Olivia
If you give a horse a cookie,
she�ll ask for some milk. And the milk will remind her of her
baby sitter, so she�ll want to see her. Instead she will find
some clay and she will want to make some flowers. When she makes
some flowers she will want to plant some Daisy and some
sunflower seeds. It�ll remind her of the beach she�ll want to
bring the pail and shovel and the beach ball. When she is done
playing at the beach she will want to go home. When she gets
home she will want to take a nap. When she is done taking a nap
she will want to go play tag. She will see a tree and want to
build a tree house. She will want some glue, wood and nails.
When she is done building the tree house she will want to go in
side. When she goes into the tree house she will be too heavy so
it will fall. She will be hungry so she will want some milk and
a cookie to go with it.
If You Give a Pig
a Hot Dog
By Mikey, Travis, and Connor B.
Brianna, Zack and Melissa
If you give a pig a hot dog he�ll
want some ketchup and mustard with it. Then he�ll want to take a
bath because he�s all dirty. Then he will want to build a barn.
That will remind him of his pig friends. Then he will want to
have a Pig party. He will want to put some party wall paper up
before the pigs get there. He will want to build a mud pool so
he will make a diving board. So they could jump in. The mud will
remind him of his dad. So he will want to visit his dad at the
mall. He will see some pictures on the wall and he will want to
buy them but they are too much money. He finds some money on the
floor and decides to play some games at the arcade. After that
he is hungry. He sees some mustard and ketchup sitting on the
table at the food court. That will remind him that he wants a
hot dog.
If You Give a
Zebra a Cookie
By Shae-Lynn, Dustin and Keilan
Kayla, Baylee and Declan
If you give a zebra a cookie he
will want a glass of milk to go with it. When he is done it will
probably remind him of his friend cow. On the way to see Cow, he
sees flowers he decided to pick flowers for his mother. Then he
picked up some milk and bread then he will go home. On his way
home he saw his friend turtle. Zebra and turtle went swimming in
the Atlantic Ocean. They saw a shark and swam out of the water
very, very quickly. On the beach they had some lemonade and
relaxed. Later in the afternoon they had dinner at turtle�s
house and had a sleepover. In the morning Zebra asked if they
could have donuts. Then they played outside and they rode their
bikes. After that he went home and went to bed. When he woke up
he asked for a drink of milk. And of course he wanted a cookie
to go with it.
The Mouse Tales project aligned
with Language, Visual Arts and Media expectations in the Ontario
grade 2 curriculum:
Language:
Grammar
use connecting words to link simple sentences use adjectives
appropriately for description
Punctuation
use capital letters for proper nouns use a comma correctly
Spelling
use words from their oral vocabulary, personal word lists, and
class lists compiled through brainstorming
Visual Presentation
use words and pictures to create a message create simple media
works (illustrated book)
Group Skills
apply the rules of participating in a conversation, demonstrating a sense
of when to speak, when to listen, and how much to say (when
brainstorming ideas) use speech appropriately for various
purposes (to influence others in the group)
Visual Arts: produce two-dimensional works of art that
communicate ideas (thoughts, feelings, experiences) for specific
purposes
Media Communication Skills
identify different technologies and understand that they serve
different functions (use of computer for communication, email,
and powerpoint presentations) |