Mrs. Isenberg
Holland Patent Elementary
Holland Patent, New York

Camille
Likes to pick grapes
In the fall
Off the grape vines
Because they taste good.

I  
Like to go with my Uncle Dan
Every day in the fall
To stores
Because I get candy bars and milkshakes
  by Jeffrey

I
Like to jump in the leaves
In the fall
In my yard
Because it's fun.
  by Rachel

I
Like to jump
In the leaves
At home
Because it's fun! 
By Lauren  

I
Like  to jump in the leaves
In the fall
At my house
Because it's fun.
  By Cory

 Grey
Likes to pick apples
In the fall
At the orchard
Because it is fun.  

I
Like to climb a platform
In the fall
In my play yard
and jump in the leaves
Because it's fun 
By Samuel  

I
Like to play catch
In the fall
On my grass
Because it's fun
  By Patrick

I
Like to go bike riding
In the fall
At home
Because it's fun
  By Warren

 Kimberly
Likes to play ball
In the fall at night
In my yard
For something to do.  

I
Like to drink hot cocoa
In the fall
At home
Because it tastes good.
  By Andrew  

I
Like to play hide and go seek
in my hunting clothes
In the fall In the bushes
Because I always win.
  By Branden

 I
Like to play volleyball with a leaf stuffed shirt
In the fall
Over the clothesline
because its fun.
  By Ben

I
Like to climb trees
In the fall
At my grandma's
Because it fun.
  By Shelby

Grey

I
Like to ice skate
In fall
At Whitestown
Because it's fun.
  By Cortny

 I
Bury my brother
in leaves
In the fall
At my house
Because it's fun.
    By Peter

I
Like to climb trees
In the fall
At my house
Because it's fun.
  By Jonathan

I
Like to drink hot cocoa
In the fall
Outside
Because it is cold out and it is warm.
  By Erin  

Patrick

Brittany
Likes  to  jump
in   the  leaves
In  the  fall
On  the  grass
Because  it's  very  fun.  

 I
Like riding my bike
In the fall
On my drive way
Because it's fun
  By Paul

I
Like to eat pumpkin pie
In the fall
At home
Because it's good. 
   By Jessica  

For assessment I looked at:
-did they use a fall theme
-did they write each W idea on a separate line
-did they begin with a capital and end with a period
-did they use word wall words correctly and have good sounds for unknown words
-were they able to copy the poem onto the computer correctly and quickly
-did their  illustration go along with their poem