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Merrick-Moore Elementary School |
When I was walking in the park...... |
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| I saw all the colorful leaves I heard the wind blowing very hard. I smelled the pumpkins. Now I can taste the pumpkin pie. Larry |
I saw all the pretty red leaves I heard the leaves crunching I could smell the apples The apple pie tastes good. Meshaunna |
| I saw birds in the tree. I heard the birds singing. I smelled ripe apples. I can taste the apple pie now. Kaylynn |
I saw the kids playing on
slides. I heard the wind blow. I smelled the Thanksgiving food all ready and when I got home it tasted great. Jasmine |
| I saw a lot of colorful leaves I heard the trees blow. I smelled the good apples. The apples taste great. Tasha |
I saw the leaves falling .I heard the wind whistle I smelled the ripe peaches. I can taste them now. Tyonna |
| I saw the colorful leaves I heard the birds singing I smelled the berries. They tasted yummy! Jeron |
I saw the apples in the basket. I heard the leaves crashing. I can smell the apple pie and it tastes great. Armani |
| I saw apples on the trees. I heard a dog walking I smelled the apples The apples tasted good. Justin |
I saw the pretty leaves I heard kids playing. I smelled apples. I tasted apple pie. Taylor |
| I assessed my students using a rubric
scale of 4 . A score of 3 and 4 was above average, a 2 was average and 1 was below. The four points I looked for in the students poems were: 1) They used the topic of fall ( a walk in the park). 2) They used their sense of sight, hearing, smell, and taste to describe their walks. 3) Their sentences were complete. 4) Their sentences began with a capital letter and ended with a special mark. |
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