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Mrs. De Boer
Crown Point Christian School
Crown Point, Indiana

 

Autumn
by Jenelle
I see pumpkins in the fall.
I see lot of leaves.
I like to jump in the leaves.
I like all the colors.

Autumn
by Brent

I see leaves fall.
I see lots of pumpkins.
I see piles of leaves.
I rake the leaves.
Autumn
by Derek

I don't see many leaves on the tree.
I see a bare tree.
I see piles of leaves.
Autumn
by Chris

You see bare trees in the fall.
And you see piles of leaves.
You can see birds going away.
I can climb trees.
Autumn
by Jolene

I see bare trees.
I see leaves fall.
Pumpkins are growing.
I jump in the leaves.
I pick the pumpkins.
Autumn
by Lynn

I see leaves fall from the trees.
I can  see the pumpkins growing.
I see bare trees.
I jump into the leaves.
I watch them fall.
Autumn
by Brian

I see bare trees.
I see brown, green and
    yellow leaves.
In autumn I see pumpkins.
I like the leaves to jump in.
Autumn
by Abigail

I see pumpkins in the fall.
I see lot of leaves.
I see piles of them.
I jump in the leaves.
I gather lots of leaves.
I make a leaf house.
Autumn
by Bethany

I see colored leaves.
I see pumpkins.
I see bare trees.
I drink hot chocolate.
I jump in the leaves.
Autumn
by Ethan

I see lots and lots of leaves.
I can see apples.
I can see bare trees.
I jump in the leaves.
I can eat the apples.
Autumn
by Timmy
The leaves are not green.
The trees are brown.
It is fun to jump in the leaves.

Autumn
    by Stephanne
Autumn
by Stephanne

I see a whole bunch of trees with the leaves falling.
I see them and I can hear them fall.
My birthday is in the fall.
Hooray!
Autumn
by Todd

Autumn is fun.
Up in the trees are cool leaves.
Trees are bare.
Usually cold
My mom likes fall.
Nice
Autumn
by Michael

I see leaves on the ground
and pumpkins.
I see bare trees.
I like to jump in the leaves.
And I like to drink hot chocolate.
Autumn
by Timmy

The leaves aren't green.
The trees aren't green.
It is fun to jump in the leaves.
Autumn
by Kellsey

I see pumpkins in the fall.
I see leaves in the fall too.
I see red leaves.
I jump in the leaves.
I like to play in the leaves.
Autumn
by Cameron

I see lots of pumpkins.
I see lots of leaves.
I see a lot of bare trees.
I like fall.
Autumn
by Tim

Autumn is fun.
Turkeys.
Upon the ground are leaves.
My leaves are red.
Nobody stays inside the house.
Autumn
by Zachary

Autumn is cool.
Up in the sky are leaves.
Three colors
Upon the ground the leaves fall.
My leaves
Nobody wants to play inside.

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Assessment

The students were asked to follow a specific guideline, and their poems were  evaluated using the following criteria:
The first three lines were supposed to be about things they see in the fall,  and the last two about things they could do in the fall.  They were also  supposed to have a properly written title and use correct punctuation and  spelling.  We encouraged them to be creative and original.  That was another  important criteria.