Mrs. Bortolussi/Brecka

Pumpkins fat small round and orange it’s colorful new Cory	Pumpkins are orange. They are round. pumpkins big smooth Brodie
Pumpkins are orange they grow round at home garden Rachael	Leaves falling down yellow orange red colorful pile ground Jessica
Trees are bare leaves have fallen What colorful piles. Kailie	Trees are bare in the fall leaves falling off Morgan
Pumpkins orange striped screened light in fall Halloween Erik	Garden potato carrot picking very busy yummy apples collect Steve
Pumpkin round pumpkin vine green stem fat orange patch Joe	Pumpkin round pumpkin vine green stem are orange fat Casey
Turkeys are good yummy and juicy fat ones turkeys Kayla	Leaves orange yellow green brown trees crunchy Kelsey
Tree colorful tree brown red orange big fat ball Joseph	Leaves falling quietly crunch red orange leaves falling down Steven
Pumpkins pumpkins round pumpkins hard pumpkins pumpkins in yard Vanessa	Scarecrows are scary and helpful and good at staying James
Turkey big fat juicy and yummy hot brown Thanksgiving Peter	Pumpkin orange stem round food juicy yummy vegetable big Justin
Trees no leaves grow quietly still branches big brown Joshua	Trees yellow leaves turkey orange red squirrel green pile Kathleen
Scarecrow old shirt stripy patches torn yellow straw scary Mitchel	Pumpkins turn orange-red in the fall bumpy hard round Brett
Leaves falling quietly down in a pile on ground. Hayley	Pumpkins big orange round pumpkin jack-o-lantern pumpkin pie yummy Jade
Trees leaves bark brown orange red crack yellow crunch Ken	Leaves falling down on the ground. What colors fell? Mitchell
Pumpkin orange round stem lines big fat hard jack-o-lantern Anthony	Squirrels fluffy tail like carrots nuts jumping fast brown Rod
Fall Time The coloured leaves. Red yellow and brown. Are falling down, To the ground. I wonder why They are falling down. Is it fall time in this town? Ian	Autumn When I rake , I see a snake. At night, It is so bright, From the street’s light. Chantal
Autumn Falling leaves orange,yellow and red, I’ll try to catch them on my head. Then I’ll go inside to play a game, I like to sit by the fire’s flame. Lisa	Autumn In Autumn, I rake the leaves, My mother says to rake, As many as I please, When I am done, I say to my mom, I had lots of fun. Alexandra
Fall Orange, red, yellow and brown. There are some colours on the ground. When I rake the leaves, I feel a light breeze. Andrew	Fall When I rake the leaves I feel the breeze, Bright leave, orange leaves. September and October leaves, I rake the leaves, In the breeze. Douglas
Fall I rake the leaves. And then I sneeze. There is a breeze That takes the leaves. Under my knees. By: Rylee	Fall I jump in the leaves. I start to sneeze. Then the cool breeze. Blows the leaves around the trees. By: Nicole
Fall In the fall. I like to play I jump in the leaves. And the birds fly away. Kristen	Fall I rake the leaves in fall to jump in the leaves Then when I’m done I put them in a bag. Nicholas
Fall I like to jump. In the leaves. When I do. It makes me sneeze. Amber	Fall In fall I rake the leaves. It is fun to rake the leaves. When I’m done raking the leaves, I jump in the pile of leaves. Paul
Fall The leaves are bright, And it is night, The leaves are falling, And my sister is calling. The air is cool, And I am a fool. Because I’m raking the leaves. In the night breeze. Katelyn	Fall Time In fall I rake the leaves, A nd I feel a gentle breeze. I sneeze and sneeze and I hear the trees Tell me more if you please. Kristy
Fall In the leave My brother gets stung by the bees, My dad starts to sneeze, And my mom likes eating cheese. Johnathan	Autumn In autumn I rake the leaves And when I’m finished, I sneeze, Then I climb the trees , And I eat my cheese . Scott
Autumn The leaves fall down. Onto the ground. Yellow, orange, and red. I can see from my bed. Cecily
Assessment Evaluation - teacher edited and revisions; based on provincial writing rubrics